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Sound:Parallel and Contrapuntal feedback and learner response


1) Type up your feedback from your teacher.

Teachers feedback: 

Superb choice of music and clips-the opening is so effective it's almost parallel but genuinely made me laugh out loud showing it meets the brief perfectly.

Perhaps the switch to parallel could of been a little bit more obvious-Perhaps the darkness and the positioning of the actor meant it took a couple of seconds to catch up.

Minor technical element-only export a minute! check your timeline before exporting.

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students - you can summarise key points if several students give you similar feedback.  

Class feedback:

WWW: Song choice was good parallel and contrapuntal clips sit 

WWW: Amazing,Brilliant both scenes from parallel and contrapuntal matched sound very well. 

EBI: Shift between contrapuntal and parallel was too sudden and fast 

WWW: Good editing and clips choice 

EBI: if it wasn't 3 minutes 

WWW: Brilliant transition 

EBI: could use more clips 

WWW: good music choice 

EBI: have better clips

WWW: Amazing clips 

EBI: clips are running smoothly

WWW: good song choice

EBI: should run smoothly 

WWW: Enjoyed it 

EBI: loud could put the sound down 

WWW: good music 

EBI: have only a minute 

WWW: good clips

EBI: one clip was too dark 

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own evaluation of your video. Write a 'What went well' (WWW) paragraph and a paragraph for 'Even Better If' (EBI) underneath the rest of your feedback.

WWW: the editing and clips were place well and engaged the audience to be more into the video itself the music was a nice touch and the clips and the music fit well as Contrapuntal and parallel 

EBI: if i didn't export for 3 minutes put the music volume down as it was loud and added more clips which are fast paced and quick gaining the audience attention 

4) Learner response: compare your own video against your evaluation of the top three videos in the class. Whose did you think was best and why? How could you have improved your own video?

I think anas one was the best as it was engaging and entertaining to me and was nice to watch. i could of used more clips and ran it all smoothly making the adjust to the switch from contrapuntal to parallel which allows the audience to see the difference 

5) Finally, what have you learned about the importance of sound to film and TV through this week's work? 
It  showed me that sound is really important and conveys a meaning to the audience and it might foreshadow events during the film or show 

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