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Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Good clear intro making original + created artist clear. Maybe need to think about everyone listens to rap - need to be a bit more specific! But agree it is mainstream.
Really liked the planned locations
other aspects of mise en scene also addressed wall
Good planning for editing/effects/genre
Delivery is strong and confident- most slides not ready text but delivering to audience
Shoe sponsor works well
Magazine research makes sense 
Excellent research into director/inspirations
Camera shots- too vague need specific examples in statement of intent.
Interesting idea for representation but need to develop this significantly for statement in particular how will you do this.
Audience and industry perhaps a little lacking but still a strong presentation 

Q + A 
Q on magazine example was answered 
Second question on mag also addressed
Narrative question addressed nicely




2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: used detail explained things clear and well understood the project and can envision what I was doing/planning

EBI: less talking fast more detail in shoe sponsor and representation. 


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I need to update my statement of intent and i need to go in clear and show what my plan is and what i inspire to do properly. This can be achievable with hard work and dedication and i can implement media theories in the music video and add some terminology in my statement of intent. 

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