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1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. Good clear intro making original + created artist clear. Maybe need to think about everyone listens to rap - need to be a bit more specific! But agree it is mainstream. Really liked the planned locations other aspects of mise en scene also addressed wall Good planning for editing/effects/genre Delivery is strong and confident- most slides not ready text but delivering to audience Shoe sponsor works well Magazine research makes sense Excellent research into director/inspirations Camera shots- too vague need specific examples in statement of intent. Interesting idea for representation but need to develop this significantly for statement in particular how will you do this. Audience and industry perhaps a little lacking but still a strong presentation Q + A Q on magazine example was answered Second question on mag also addressed Narrative question addressed nicely 2) Use this feedback, c